I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Fakaalofa Lahi Atu My name is Asfan and I am from Owairaka primary school. I like your blog post about the Leopard seal and how you had describe everything and give us the information so that we can understand and learn more about the Leopard Seal. But you can describe more like how they go under water or how many feet they can go etc. Which seal is your favorite seal.Thanks for sharing your learning. Blog you later, Asfan.
Kia Ora, my name is Taylah and I go to Owairaka District School. I love how you described this picture! Maybe next time you describe something you could give it a push and put some bigger words in there! Great Job!!- Blog You Later... -Taylah.
Fakaalofa Lahi Atu My name is Asfan and I am from Owairaka primary school. I like your blog post about the Leopard seal and how you had describe everything and give us the information so that we can understand and learn more about the Leopard Seal. But you can describe more like how they go under water or how many feet they can go etc. Which seal is your favorite seal.Thanks for sharing your learning.
ReplyDeleteBlog you later,
Asfan.
Kia Ora, my name is Taylah and I go to Owairaka District School. I love how you described this picture! Maybe next time you describe something you could give it a push and put some bigger words in there!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job!!-
Blog You Later...
-Taylah.